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D.Va by Maricu-Mana D.Va by Maricu-Mana
Fanart of one of my favourite Overwatch heroes, D.Va.
She's like my spirit animal and I love to play her (even after the big nerf T_T poor D.Va...)


Even though I really pushed myself on this piece, I'm not quite satisfied with the end result. But I think I've learned a new thing or two.
Critique is always welcome as I'm always trying to improve my art.
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Rorelse Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dropping in for a critique! :eager:


To start off with I want to mention my favourite part which is her right thigh, idk just love it. 
Her entire pose is fleshy and not stiff, I like the tangibility. 

Now from what you have mentioned as your weak spots, I'd like to say that anatomy-wise, I don't see any major flaws, nothing jumps out at me, aside from perhaps the fabric of her clothes sinking into her bellybutton, but that's a little closer to artistic liberty I believe :lmao:

What also stands out to me is the lack of detail/effort put into the clouds. Compared to everything else in the piece, which is well polished and detailed, they seem hastily slapped on and out of place. Defining the edges a little and giving more variety to the shapes would work to your advantage. 

To conclude, I love the composition, it guides the eyes well, love her pose and choice of colours. 
What I feel needed more work are the clouds and stars, so the sky in general. 



Hope you find this helpful and have a great day :hug:
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Maricu-Mana Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2017   Digital Artist
Thank you so much for taking your time to write some critique :heart:

I'm glad you like her thigh, haha :D
I tried to make a 3d model for reference first, but in the end I changed the pose a lot lol. But still, I think it helped for the whole construction.
(I used this tool, it's great and there's a free version I'm still testing out: terawell.net/terawell/?page_id… )

You're right, I didn't even realised I put so low effort into the sky. Need to be be more careful next time.

Thank you, I'm always happy to get detailed critique Bunny Emoji-72 (Kawaii) [V4] 
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Rorelse Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Always welcome :heart: 

Damn that looks like an interesting and hella helpful tool! 
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Aer0Hail Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahhh so cool!!! <3
I really love her pose and her mech!!
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Maricu-Mana Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2017   Digital Artist
Thank you! :heart:
I'm glad I didn't draw the whole mech, that would've been a lot of work XD
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SonicClone Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017
This is really nice
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Maricu-Mana Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017   Digital Artist
Thanks! :3
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Riocarp Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2017
soo lovely! Gj man
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Maricu-Mana Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017   Digital Artist
Thank you!
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